Jack you have written a heart felt song here..Has some sweet melodic tunes played on the kiddy "LEARNPIANO" edition keyboard….Some little china man will hear this song and think..THAts The 2000098570008…..And he will think to himself "DA KI-Bod is well past expirey"… BUt in you case jack you have it out and pumpin them out… When you sent this song to me i felt it had something special about it..I think it should be re made again on good gear and seriously polished.. I do like it.It has an awesome lyrical structure and a suttle catchyness to it. I hate the drums they’re fucked…But i can easily ignore them with the other strong elements that hold the song together. I think this is your best song to date.For me i think i would be happy to hear that on my death bed………..Strag=nge yes well done mate…I can wait for your next one…But cant wait for the one after that.
Ah a hansford bros collab at last! yeah don’t mind the style on this number, i distinctively hear the pop bass kick of the 2000098570009, 1 iteration later than Tim suggested….lol…i don’t normally focus on vocal lyrics but you tracks put focus onto them which is cool, it’s a bit of a bizaar style but it has something….the drop B voice is a little confronting in my view but blending with the "master bean" harmonies sounds good to me….sounds like there was more attention to detail on this track which i like and the melody is solid…i have had an awesome idea, try to find one of Tim’s distortion pedals down in the shed and bust out the soldering iron, i’m sure the 2000098570009 could sound kick ass with some hardware hacks…..Ok so one of my favorites of yours Jack, i’ll give her a 7/10 . Good job sir!
I’ actually made another tune after this, a month or so ago called ‘Shoplifter’,,.. but I’ve quarantined it,.. no more thorough shit,.. it was acceptable in the past due to being on training wheels but if there is no evolution or improvement about my songs,.. they got to be axed on the spot. No more sickness inducing stuff on Freelabel from me, unless it passes the Tim bareability test,.. it failed with me..and failed with him.. so she got cut, I gots to do better or it shouldn’t be submitted, it’s for everybodies protection ha hauw..
Tim made this droning shit alot better than it was, cleaned it up, gave it an impressive, angelic, harmony, a grammy to him, a grammy to him.
Jack you have written a heart felt song here..Has some sweet melodic tunes played on the kiddy "LEARNPIANO" edition keyboard….Some little china man will hear this song and think..THAts The 2000098570008…..And he will think to himself "DA KI-Bod is well past expirey"…
BUt in you case jack you have it out and pumpin them out…
When you sent this song to me i felt it had something special about it..I think it should be re made again on good gear and seriously polished..
I do like it.It has an awesome lyrical structure and a suttle catchyness to it. I hate the drums they’re fucked…But i can easily ignore them with the other strong elements that hold the song together.
I think this is your best song to date.For me i think i would be happy to hear that on my death bed………..Strag=nge yes well done mate…I can wait for your next one…But cant wait for the one after that.
"Some little china man will hear this song and think..THAts The 2000098570008"
HAHAHA!! ,.. that’s up there with the Ride-on Lawnmower,.. another quote on the Freelabel t-shirt one day.
Ah a hansford bros collab at last! yeah don’t mind the style on this number, i distinctively hear the pop bass kick of the 2000098570009, 1 iteration later than Tim suggested….lol…i don’t normally focus on vocal lyrics but you tracks put focus onto them which is cool, it’s a bit of a bizaar style but it has something….the drop B voice is a little confronting in my view but blending with the "master bean" harmonies sounds good to me….sounds like there was more attention to detail on this track which i like and the melody is solid…i have had an awesome idea, try to find one of Tim’s distortion pedals down in the shed and bust out the soldering iron, i’m sure the 2000098570009 could sound kick ass with some hardware hacks…..Ok so one of my favorites of yours Jack, i’ll give her a 7/10 . Good job sir!
I’ actually made another tune after this, a month or so ago called ‘Shoplifter’,,.. but I’ve quarantined it,.. no more thorough shit,.. it was acceptable in the past due to being on training wheels but if there is no evolution or improvement about my songs,.. they got to be axed on the spot. No more sickness inducing stuff on Freelabel from me, unless it passes the Tim bareability test,.. it failed with me..and failed with him.. so she got cut, I gots to do better or it shouldn’t be submitted, it’s for everybodies protection ha hauw..