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  1. Mangrove head December 20, 2010 7:37 am  Reply

    Das was better controlled, be careful in regards to immediate elevation of singing tone though,.. otherwise you will illustrate a short and sharp choke,.. but love the arrangement so far,… when those pair of voices are alligned together in precise cooperation you have a nice harmony bopping along to that delicious synth bass,.. be sure to insert calming airy vocals wherever possible,.. they work the best with the overall pallette,.. and be mindful of not only your theme, but the phrasing to which you illustrate your theme,.. try not to overdo long-ended notes,… and then you should have a real cracker here, white-boooooooiyyyyyy.

  2. Dave J December 20, 2010 1:43 pm  Reply

    Man, where did this come from???? this is completely opposite from from what i was expecting….like the exploration, dont even know what to say to this style as i think you have just invented something out of nowhere, its short and am going to have to hear where this brand new genre steers you, solid man though, how do you keep coming up with new styles?

  3. greenblob December 26, 2010 3:02 am  Reply

    cool man.. i really dig this style.. awesome lyrics.. the non rock/metal vibe of this one really suits the wide panned/doubled vocals that is kinda your trademark for me.. I really dont like the effect when there is too much going on behind it.. but it works a treat in this… love the weirdo bass sound and the cheese swing… This is the kinda stuff I like to lisen to.. great beat and good lyrics all wrapped up in a wide stereo package.. Hate to say it, but this one oozes Faith No More (mike patton) vocals.. but I love that damn band for their quirkiness.. and I could grow to love this too if it ever becomes a full tune..

  4. greenblob January 5, 2011 12:51 am  Reply

    this is growing on me even more after just a week.. I think the second half grabs me more than the first.. the chorus and the dub bass were made for eachother… I put my one vote a month "finish this" ballot on the table encased in the salt cracker pepper shaker – for the the cracker shaker..

  5. Dave January 6, 2011 2:54 am  Reply

    +1 for doing something with this, another +1 for the keyboard synth bass line, lovely mate…has a cool feel, solid writing man…

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